Friday, 5 May 2017


WALHT add a twist to our writing
Here is my poem:

I didn't go to Colombia because I don't know where it is.
I did't go  to the pool because it was cold.
I didn't zoom a million miles.
But i did go fishing at the Groynes.

I didn't eat poisonous berry.
I didn't eat chocolate.
I didn't eat lemons.
But i did eat salmon.

I didn't see Sponge Bob.
I didn't see a submarine
I didn't see a million dollars
But I did see a trout.

Next time I would like to make my second 2 verses more fun by adding more detail.

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